My topic Is about the collar shirts at San Fernando Middle School. I ‘am complaining about the collar shirts because they are really enoin cause they squeeze your neck and bugg you. I also think that collar shirts Is a Issue because other people complain about them and bugg them. Most of the students at San Fernando Middle School don’t like them and always carry the shirts In their shoulders and they dont care what the teachers tell them. The students hate It when a teacher tells them to put It on.
Well I also think that collar shirts Is a Issue for teachers even though they dont have to wear them. All the time when a student dosen’t have a collar shirt they have to stop them and tell them to put It on and talk to them. If they dont have a collar shirt on, they send them to the Dean’s were they have collar shirts, and they have to go and get one from them. and thats why It buggs the teachers because It waste’s their time and Is a pain In the neck when a student gives the teachers a hard time with the collar shirts.
I also think that San Fernando Middle School should not have collar shirts cause they are very Expensive and students dont want to spend alot of money on a collar shirt. I think that not having collar shirts could be easy for students and teachers because every day when you come to school In the morning the principles or teachers are always In the door checking If they have collar shirts. If the teachers see that you dont have a collar shirt they start screaming at you and they make you go to the Dean’s Office and get a collar shirt that you could borrow.
I think that If they get rid of the collar shirts they wont have the teachers keeping check of students. Also teachers wont have to be In the door cheking on students If they have their collar shirts on. The school wont have to be wasting money for collar shirts for the ones that they let the students borrow when they dont have non or when they dont bring It to school thats what usually buggs the students and teachers.
I think that all this problem can be solved If the principles of San Fernando Middle School have a meeting of why or why not should they were collar shirts In school.they should also have an agreement If they should wear collar shirts or not. The whole problem can be solved If they will get ridd of the collar shirts. I think It will work out better for students and teachers If theres no collar shirts in school.
bball09 said,
June 12, 2009 @ 5:21 pm
Your persuasive essay is okay. Collar end with ed at the end so it’s collared. Couple of misspelled words so you should read it.